Yayyy for posting Winn fic! Seriously, you have no idea how thrilling this is for me. The only thing is that you shift tenses a fair amount, from present to past tense. If you want someone to read over your fic and edit it for you, I'm more than happy to offer my services. Because this fic is really interesting and shows a lot of promise, and I'd hate to see it brought down by grammar errors.

<3!